All Comments on 'Ideal Suburbia Ch. 07b'

Very good writing about an astute and self confident young man with an insightful range of experiences. I kind of wish he wasn't such a horn-dog and there was more character development and lead up time. But that's me. Not most people's cup of tea I imagine. I mostly tend to pass over the sex scenes these day for more plot and character. Not to take anything away from the author. He's not good he's damn good.

I liked the strip club and bakery stories best. Looking forward to more.

Thanks for the praise. I find it an interesting balancing act between plot and action. Never an easy one!