All Comments on 'Ideal Suburbia Ch. 17'

by Publius68

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BruceWoBruceWoalmost 3 years ago

I do hope that you can change your mind and make another chapter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Your series was easily the best written on this site. Creative, humorous, and the sex was great. Please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Thoroughly enjoyed the series. Would like to see more stories around building the country club and recruiting horny female members.

Publius68Publius68almost 3 years agoAuthor

I’ve got another series I’m drawing up right now in a completely different world.

But what would people think of an anthology series of sorts, set at the club, not all starring Our Hero, but in some cases his staff and various members?

Papaof12Papaof12almost 3 years ago

Excellent story. Sorry to see it end.

e_ro_ger_storiese_ro_ger_storiesalmost 3 years ago

I enjoyed this series. Would like to see more stories and series.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Loved this story, and I would absolutely love to hear about the goings-on at the club.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Outstanding series. A couple were weaker than the norm, but overall a really great read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
fabulous series

One rarely gets a chance to read such a well-crafted and well-written love story, and I just wish it could continue! Five stars!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You are good at writing. Thank you for the story, but don't hesitate to strecth your scope.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Please, please more!

Thoroughly enjoyed the series.

ActingupActingupabout 2 years ago

Thanks for the series!

Ladygrey69Ladygrey69almost 2 years ago

I very much enjoyed reading the series. Good work.

Would love to read more about the club.

Mr_Hit_ThatMr_Hit_Thatalmost 2 years ago

This was really good. I hope to see a continuation as the club is completed.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I agree - regular updates required. Well done!!

BruceWoBruceWoalmost 2 years ago

Have always hope that there would be a few additional chapters to this story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Fun fantasy

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

sorry to see this one end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

last chapter the best!! Want to see more about how the two of them keep getting together until they join into a partnership. One of the best I have read on this site!

Macsta1952Macsta1952over 1 year ago

I can get my life back now that I have finished. I could not put it down. Thank you Publius68

DwarfLord50DwarfLord50about 1 year ago

Like I said in a previous comment, I was slow to warm up to this main character. In hind sight, I think I had a hard time reading him. Is he just a player using these women? Is he caught up in unusual circumstances? For me, this character really hit his stride when the idea of the new golf course came along, which I suspect wasn’t an accident. You are such a strong writer. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Truly great series. Thoroughly enjoyable. Well written and crafted. Great characters. Would love a sequel series featuring various adventures of the cast of this series. This is the last of your stories, I've now read all of them and think I managed to keep the best till last somehow. Thanks again please write more. Lots more. BardnotBard.

londonteadrinkerlondonteadrinker12 months ago

Just as good enjoying this series for the second time.

WeissbiermannWeissbiermann12 months ago

I’m going to be late for work, thanks to you. No really, thank you. Please continue the story.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I think you are premature to end it.He is going to go through a new phase in his life as he moves from employee to employer. The story has great potential now

KernflakesKernflakes10 months ago

I really this this series deserves a part 2. So many different paths this can take, and would be an amazing story

BigSyd_2023BigSyd_202310 months ago

Well, your golf course could use some nudity (or risque outfits), which could lead to some sexy play. The refreshment cart guys or gals from college could be interesting ideas. Then a house party at your place is an interesting idea. Thanks Syd p..s. Enjoyed the story

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

A great series… but spoiled by a very rushed last chapter. You knew it was coming (we all hoped so) but why not act it all out like the others?

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