All Comments on 'Identities Ch. 02'

Please continue. Would love to see more of the storyline. Thanks.

I'm enjoying this chapter very much and I am awaiting the next instalment with anticipation. If I had to guess I would say she is Nadia, however I don't really mind, whatwver makes it hotter is what I want. I only pray that I can read a hot foursome. Any clues on whether that is coming our way? I mean ugh I do want that why isn't there any of that in this category but more importantly though hotness is great but that's not enough so the rest is very welcome and it's very interesting and I appreciate the overarching story. What is that German guy's deal anyway? I had at first thought Michael was the hot baddie she would end up with but now I'm not so sure. What's Marks deal. please publish more soon, so I can put my mind to rest. I've spent too long thinking about this!

Your writing is great so far! I can't wait until you reveal who she really is...Michael is such a jerk and I hope Mark helps her somehow. She seems like a great heroine so far.. the right amount of defiance without being dumb, quick witted, and not simpy. I'm interested to know this Lord guy and why he wants her so bad!

And forty million is a bit ridiculous but it's your story. :p

Eh. 40 million dollars. Girl must have a magic pussy. 40 mill...jeez, who is this dude and how did he get this rich being this stupid? He can have a small harem for that price, filled to the brim with both women and men fighting each other for his affection - magic pussy be damned. And with all the (cough) that went down during ww2, surely there's some old lab tucked away somewhere he could spruce up with the 40mill and genetically cook up an even better magic vagina? This is gonna be goood. I know requests are uncool, so this will just be a statement: I hope the bile-bitches that captured her gets eaten alive by cockroaches. Shot for story. Can't wait for next chapter