All Comments on 'Idiots Ch. 03'

by lessthanperfect

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
fantastic

I've really enjoyed these stories, really fun.

You've captured their relationship perfectly - passion, affection and lots of banter.

What a great couple. Really hope there's more to come

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Awww!

What a sweet couple. Thanks for not ruining their love by having them indulge in a three way they would later regret.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Good Characters

This is a beautiful story with good characters that a reader can easily come to love. Keep up the good work. I look forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

IS THE STORY COMPLETE .hope not want to read more till the end

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

SORRY ABOUT THE EARLIER COMMENT (a typing error)

just want to say loved your story.

and want to read a CONTINUATION of this story .hope it isn't complete...

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great Read!

Not sure a three-some would ruin the story, or that they would have to regret it.

But however the author has the story play out if what should happen. Well written, good grammar, no issues. Oh, there is one. In the first story the cop compared himself to "Jerry Briscoe" on Law and Order.

The character was Lennie Briscoe. The actor was Jerry Orbach. Sorry, I am OCD.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
liked it

witty a bit dramatic but good honest feelings. youd think cal wouldn't be one for spoken words but he got there in the end, thank or finishing this

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

This was great fun. Made me,laugh out loud several times

dnsontndnsontnabout 2 years ago

Fantastic series! Nice to see these guys be “Idiots” for each other.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Great love story with sharp dialogue and humour.

Certainly a welcome change from so many earnest and dramatic stories on this site.

Thank you lessthanperfect for a perfectly enjoyable read.

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