by Asbel
More, Please! Curious to see this play out - the more the Levi's in my life "offered," the more I resisted. Now, I wish I hadn't. But that's my story, not Ash's.
I really enjoy how you are taking the time to build this story. Really good character development.
I’m wondering where this is going. Why does Levi keep coming to this church? Hell, why did he start to begin with? And why did I immediately think Levi’s business is making BDSM accoutrements? LOLLL
The strongest of three strong chapters so far. The sensory details at dinner were just right, and the tension that began at the restaurant and continued through the last word of the chapter are pushing all my buttons.
Levi is goooooood at this.
Holy smokes, it's getting hot in here... Poor Ash, I wouldn't remember my own name either.