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GybbsGybbsover 4 years ago
Longing

More, Please! Curious to see this play out - the more the Levi's in my life "offered," the more I resisted. Now, I wish I hadn't. But that's my story, not Ash's.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I really enjoy how you are taking the time to build this story. Really good character development.

geemeedeegeemeedeeover 4 years ago

I’m wondering where this is going. Why does Levi keep coming to this church? Hell, why did he start to begin with? And why did I immediately think Levi’s business is making BDSM accoutrements? LOLLL

Matt_Wants_MoreMatt_Wants_Moreabout 4 years ago
Nice slow burn.

The strongest of three strong chapters so far. The sensory details at dinner were just right, and the tension that began at the restaurant and continued through the last word of the chapter are pushing all my buttons.

Levi is goooooood at this.

TalkSexyToMe2029TalkSexyToMe2029about 2 years ago

Holy smokes, it's getting hot in here... Poor Ash, I wouldn't remember my own name either.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Its definitely getting interesting

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Asbel has lived in places. Not all those places were nice. He wrote a terrible book in high school. He doesn't remember the title. It's gone now. Then he met the man who became Ricky. In 2013, Asbel started writing another book called Hematoma. It was a book about Ricky. Pe...

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