All Comments on 'Idolatria Ch. 04'

I love it. The story doesn’t read like “converting the Christian” to me; more like “awakening the sleeping beauty.” I just wish the chapters came faster — but hell, we’re lucky you’re writing this at all.

There are typos. I'm sorry.

I am such a huge fan of your writing. I agree with a previous commenter. This doesn’t come off as a converting a Christian story, but as more of an awakening. Not only the awakening of same sex feelings, but of d/s tendencies as well. You are handling this story with the same gentle pace as Hematoma. Where that story had very dark elements, this story has light. Well done. Looking forward to future chapters.

I agree with the previous posters that we are lucky you are writing!!! [I’ve been so engrossed in the story I haven’t noticed any typos whatsoever :)]

I wonder about this hematoma story - do you have it on lit erotica? or elsewhere? I want to read everything you’ve written!

@laura1234 See my bio. Hematoma will be coming out this summer, fully revised and heavily edited.

I ran across this by accident and have been reading it non-stop. I like how Ash is starting to question his thoughts and feelings.