by AlexMakin
Well written and displayed a masterful knowledge of the topic!!!!!!!
Thank you so much for sharing it with us -- five stars. More please!
Feel free to check out my other stories as well!
I have never felt the need to leave a comment on this website before (and I've been here for years) but your story was so compelling, so beautifully crafted, that I absolutely have to compliment you. The ending was brilliant! This was a wonderful piece of work, and I loved every word of it. Keep up the great work!
Superbly written with knowledge of BDSM.
Pain bring us to higher orgasms. Thanks
This is really one of the best stories on this site I've ever read. Just the right amount of introduction and context without being boring before getting to the first scene. Great anticipation throughout the story, you built up each scene in an exciting way. Just the right level of fantasy: not over the top and unbelievable, but not so grounded in reality that it gets bogged down in details like safewords and blood circulation. This is a fantasy that makes your head swim. To top it off: a sweet twist and a nicely wrapped up conclusion to it all. Not to mention you pushed just about all of my buttons with this story: being found in self bondage, predicament bondage, writing a letter confessing how you want to be used and having someone follow through on it. Well done and thank you for a wonderful story.
... for me to read at work! It was so slow today I couldn't resist coming on Literotica for a quickie. It was everything I could do to keep my hand out of my panties while I read this masterpiece of yours, and now one of my coworkers is giving me a funny look. So thank you for your hot and imaginative and twisted love story, but no thanks for embarrassing me at my place of business.
"Adrenaline is a funny thing. "
Great line! Masterfully told story, great inventions, very hot!
I've read many of these 'Surprise! It's the husband' stories. I would never have guessed...not for an instant, that yours was to twist around like that. And for once it was perfection. Standing ovation.
Great story, well told, very inventive and oh so hot! very nice indeed. thank you
I've got to say I agree with everyone, even the reading at work comment, this was a fantastic read. So glad I gave it a try I usually go with the longer series stories. Please keep writing.
I've tried this story twice and its so good I can't get through it without finishing
This was one of the most incredible stories I have ever read! It was beautifully written and wonderfully torturous while still loving and sweet. You did an amazing job!
That last twist. Just the right balance of cute and funny and erotic. Well done. Add a mental +1 to your favorites, too, because I totally would if I bothered to make an account :P.
This story was absolutely perfect! Not too long, not too short well wriiten and erotic without anything gross. Im bookmarking to read again and will be reading your other stories as well. 5 stars I loved it, well done. Thank You for the pleasurable story!