by CorruptingPower
Pretty good, however Artemis was the goddess of the hunt; Athena was the goddess of wisdom.
Nice chapter. I hope you start posting Morgana's Gift here too. As good as MC Stories is, they do not update that site nearly often enough.
I hope you do not leave the readers hanging and write an ending to this. you put the guy from the dark web in the story, what did he find out about the bracelet? is there anything else the bracelet can do? can it be controlled in any way by the wearer? I feel you need to add more to this story.
Great story! I love the fact that he’s a basically nice guy who isn’t a rapist.
So Rita did not give him a IF I AM HONEST response. could she be the one? Time will Tell. 5 stars
I really enjoyed this chapter. It invoked an emotional connection, with me cheering for Deke. If I have any criticism, it’s that I have no idea where the story goes from here. I’m not asking for a cliffhanger or something spectacular even, just a little something to draw attention to the next chapter. Overall this is a well done, chapter.
So far everything I’ve read of yours I’ve really enjoyed. Please continue this and morgana! I need to see how they develop
Love the story and the Concept of the Bracelet. He should go through alot of Women until he finds the Right one and gives the Bracelet away.
I loved this story. Perfectly in my wheelhouse.
Lovely plotting, lots of call backs a joy from start to finish
I loved this story. Perfectly in my wheelhouse.
Lovely plotting, lots of call backs a joy from start to finish
I am really enjoying this series and all of your stories I've read so far. I hoping that Derrick finds his true love and I really wished that the bracelet was real as I could do with its help.
Aaaahhhh...ha,ha,ha, you SSSOOO funny, throwing in the last bit with all the Spanish stuff...no, REALLY...I very much appreciated that, as I speak Spanish; a little other-language dirty talking goes quite a ways with me!!! Rita was a "surprise", methinks, and the officer got to see her with 'evidence' on her face!!
Resisting the bracelet's leading seems to be getting our MC into a lot of twists, which he really can avoid...if only...
Five**5**Stars, and keeping up the overall rating of the series...🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌