by AgathonWrites
Hot but not quite satisfying, If I'm honest, I think what I want is a story and not just a parade of encounters. A proofreader could also help.
I would have a chance hotel encounter in Zanzibar City with a man attracted to Riley. When she brushes him off telling him she's a lesbian, he comes back with something like, "Have you ever made love to a man? Or did some jerk hurt you and turn you off men sexually?" This line forces her to confront why she believes she is a lesbian. after her second brush off of him. He could respond with something like, "How do you know you're not bisexual? Someone who can find love with both a man and a woman? Or maybe both at the same time? Or maybe you are a sexual submissive, do you let your partner take control in the bedroom or wherever you fuck?"
Because Zanzibar City is in a semi-autonomous Islamic province of Tanzania in East Africa, lesbianism is very much frowned upon on the island, of course male homosexuality has more serious consequences even in today's more enlightened age. So, Riley might feel a little pressure given how submissive she has already been through two sexual encounters so far.
If I'm honest, here are some of my favor hotels on the list of places on the list.
La Paz, Bolivia - Almudena Apart Hotel
Zanzibar City, Tanzania - Hotel Verde Zanzibar - Azam Luxury Resort & Spa
Bishkek, Kyrgyzstan - Novotel Bishkek City Center
Thimphu, Bhutan - Le Méridien Thimphu
Dakar, Senegal - King Fahd Palace Hotel
Luanda, Angola - InterContinental Luanda Miramar, an IHG Hotel
Jakarta, Indonesia - The Ritz-Carlton Jakarta, Mega Kuningan
Hope this helps you in crafting your story. Remember also that many of these countries are not as progressive as western countries when it comes to sexuality, so if you seek to maintain verisimilitude keep that in mind and do your homework.
As exotic as some of those locations are, give me the following...
1. Banff, Alberta, Canada
2. Grand Teton National Park in Wyoming
3. Redwood National Park in Northern California
4. Laie, Oahu, Hawaii on the North Shore of Oahu
5. Black Hills National Forest, South Dakota
6. Caba San Lucas, Mexico
7. Pebble Beach, California
Obviously for different reasons.
It would be interesting if she ran into one of the vitamin K girls from chapter 10 of the CP story.
The first 100 pieces of a 1000 piece puzzle. Not everyone's cup of tea I guess. I'm in!