All Comments on 'If I'm Honest - Picture Perfect Ch. 02 Pt. 01'

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metroalmametroalma6 months ago

Hot but not quite satisfying, If I'm honest, I think what I want is a story and not just a parade of encounters. A proofreader could also help.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Made my cock very hard, well done!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I would have a chance hotel encounter in Zanzibar City with a man attracted to Riley. When she brushes him off telling him she's a lesbian, he comes back with something like, "Have you ever made love to a man? Or did some jerk hurt you and turn you off men sexually?" This line forces her to confront why she believes she is a lesbian. after her second brush off of him. He could respond with something like, "How do you know you're not bisexual? Someone who can find love with both a man and a woman? Or maybe both at the same time? Or maybe you are a sexual submissive, do you let your partner take control in the bedroom or wherever you fuck?"

Because Zanzibar City is in a semi-autonomous Islamic province of Tanzania in East Africa, lesbianism is very much frowned upon on the island, of course male homosexuality has more serious consequences even in today's more enlightened age. So, Riley might feel a little pressure given how submissive she has already been through two sexual encounters so far.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

If I'm honest, here are some of my favor hotels on the list of places on the list.

La Paz, Bolivia - Almudena Apart Hotel

Zanzibar City, Tanzania - Hotel Verde Zanzibar - Azam Luxury Resort & Spa

Bishkek, Kyrgyzstan - Novotel Bishkek City Center

Thimphu, Bhutan - Le Méridien Thimphu

Dakar, Senegal - King Fahd Palace Hotel

Luanda, Angola - InterContinental Luanda Miramar, an IHG Hotel

Jakarta, Indonesia - The Ritz-Carlton Jakarta, Mega Kuningan

Hope this helps you in crafting your story. Remember also that many of these countries are not as progressive as western countries when it comes to sexuality, so if you seek to maintain verisimilitude keep that in mind and do your homework.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I enjoyed the original series. I think I will enjoy this series as well.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

As exotic as some of those locations are, give me the following...

1. Banff, Alberta, Canada

2. Grand Teton National Park in Wyoming

3. Redwood National Park in Northern California

4. Laie, Oahu, Hawaii on the North Shore of Oahu

5. Black Hills National Forest, South Dakota

6. Caba San Lucas, Mexico

7. Pebble Beach, California

Obviously for different reasons.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

It would be interesting if she ran into one of the vitamin K girls from chapter 10 of the CP story.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

The first 100 pieces of a 1000 piece puzzle. Not everyone's cup of tea I guess. I'm in!

Rhino77PIlotRhino77PIlot5 months ago

Very titillating.

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Just a rookie writer sharing their first real attempts at putting together some words for the first time in a long time. QT:UK and Picture Perfect are both written with the blessing and support of the original Quaranteam author. Writers block is real and it sucks - but QT:U...