All Comments on 'If The Fates Allow'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

This one slays me. Where else have you published that your work has been stolen? I know I’ve read this. You are very talented.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Hard to read

This story is powerful, and it tears at the heart. I can relate, not in exactly the same scenario, but “I c-“ is, was, so real in that years ago if I could, I would not be pining away over the one I let get away. The one that might still be alive today if I could have had him, and loved him as I know I could, but was too chicken shit to take that leap. Oh, how my heart aches for him. Your writing has meaning and depth and I will look forward to more awesome work from you. And, shame on anyone who steals your work. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Fuck! I feel like I have to say something, but I don't have the right words. How do you write a comment to a piece that is all about feelings and they get into you, they are all around you and you can't get away from you own memories that are steared up and wouldn't go away? But i don't want to remember! I come here for an easy read on Friday night to get me in the mood before going out and what do you do?? You post a new story, and I have to read it, and now what?? Looks like instead of going out I will stay home and drink, and remember, and search profiles of people long gone from my life :( And it is your fault! You and your perfect writing!

CorjixCorjixover 5 years ago
Gravity

I once knew a guy who had his own gravity, too. The sweetest, most handsome, happiest; and most kind person I had/have ever met. One night when our other housemates were absent, he asked if I would do a pill with him...take a trip together. I have never been more torn up inside than on that night, or even with just the memory of it. I said no. Drugs were not my thing. So my thing had a solo flight that night; and I just curled up and cried myself to sleep.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
You’re back.

I was so excited to see your username back in action & your material being reposted. You were always one of my favorite writers here.

canndcannd8 months ago

I really want more of them. Do they end up together ?

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