All Comments on 'If Things Had Been Different Ch. 02'

except for a few typo's this was a good story

I’m loving both chapters in this story so far. Very well written, I noticed a couple typos but it was easy to keep moving past them.

Don't blame her for the typos, she recently lost her editor!

Great story Julie, and particularly hot given the characters.

Keep up the good work, NMP!

Shady, this is a beautiful bright story. I'm so glad to see these two together again albeit for a short time. I beg the question, can you be IN Love with two people at the same time. Is there a "dominant" love or preference for one over the other. Curious to hear what people think. Maybe the feedback will encourage Shady_Lady to write another chapter with perhaps some new ideas and or direction. BTW great job Lady

Shady, this is a beautiful bright story. I'm so glad to see these two together again albeit for a short time. I beg the question, can you be IN Love with two people at the same time. Is there a "dominant" love or preference for one over the other. Curious to hear what people think. Maybe the feedback will encourage Shady_Lady to write another chapter with perhaps some new ideas and or direction. BTW great job Lady

(Reposted. It come out "anonymous" the first time)

Just like the first one. And although it is nice to have an editor I could care less about the typos if I can tell what the story is about. Keep it up

Another wonderful story, You have managed yet again to bring tears to my eyes, the feelings between love and lust are very much the same. To long for the things we can't hold onto but give us so much pleasure is a true aphrodisiac, your stories are a gentle reminder to me of all the things I long for, but too afraid to openly display.

Sara.

So many things to like about this story, sorry not like but love. Four years thinking about a lost lover, yes I think I might have tied her down, a bit more than loosely. That is love, what they did afterwards is lust. fantastic I say.

You have captured the English humor, it is an art form. The start, maybe, of a Ds style relationship, whether by accident or design, that in itself will keep me coming back for more.

Why do I get the feeling that as soon as Sarah was in through the doors of the hotel the Harley would have screamed off into the distance. Fear or Fight.

5 stars

Ah, old flames rekindled! So good to have them both together again, however briefly xxxxx

I’m sad…she left her again

A sad pattern develops …