All Comments on 'If Things Had Been Different Ch. 04'

I'm not sure if this story has ended or if there's more to come. Julie remains something of a mystery---I've got my own ideas, it would be good to read yours. Whatever, this has been a nicely developed (developing?) story. Thanks, Shady.

Such a great story but so many questions. I'm hoping this wasn't the end

Awesome story! Well written and hot. You obviously don't need me anymore!!!

I love the drawn out question game, and the detail in the trip to Japan. And of course, picturing my mother as an erstwhile dyke.

can't wait for more!

M

More please......

Aww I love this series. So what does Julie really do for work? How can Short Stuff just wisk off to Mexico to be with Baldy? Oops that's 120 seconds I have to rub myself now. Thanks for writing this story. It's sexy, it's fun, its intriguing.

I thought quite a lot about what I think of the series.

On one hand, the sex scenes were really great. Well written, arousing, creative.

On the other hand, I really couldn't believe the whole story around them.

I don't believe real people act like this. They don't live together for several months without finding out the basics about each other. They don't meet every few years, have superb sex, get abandoned, and then continue to trust on the next meeting.

So, I'm left with a story I mostly enjoyed, but had a lot of criticism towards.

Guess that's why it's a fictional story rather than a real life report

Am definitely going to bet me a rub-o-meter, so many questions, so few answers. A great storyline, as some one else mentioned it isn't a bio just a great story.

I like the mystery surrounding Julie. Suspending belief is sometimes crucial, and this works perfectly as it is xxxxx

Why can’t they just be? This is breaking my heart

Starting to get a bit annoyed at being toyed with...