All Comments on 'If Tomorrow Never Comes'

What’s not to like?

Another read, and this is still a 5* story. Short, to the point, and utterly brilliant.

I want to go quietly, and peacefully, in my sleep.

Like my grandfather did.

Not screaming in terror like the passengers on his bus!

Well I guess I am going to have to read more of your stories! I just finished your latest, and wanted to see what else you wrote. Apparently a plethora of stories during the pandemic, lol. You have a singular wit: droll and a bit morbid. But hey, it’s different and enjoyable, after reading the thousandth version of “February Sucks”!

An excellent use of 750 words. Very good read.

L M F A O , you have just got another fan .

I was good with this, as with almost all ur stories… until he said he’ll dump his wife’s ashes in the toilet. Just no. 3 stars. — Bob

Dumping his wife's ashes in the toilet was one of the best parts. still seems incomplete.

Wouldn't have much minded have the shooting in there as well, just for closure.😂🤣😱

Do you ever take one of the twitter posts and elaborate it to a full story? :)

After the 1st half of the story, I did not know why you wrote it. While reading the 2nd half I could barely stop reading it was getting that good. The last 1/4 was so funny I was LOL my wife asked me what I was reading so I shared it with her.

She was laughing so hard she said I now know why you have such a large gun collection. I told her no that is not why I have the gun collection. But it is why I don't give you the combination to the gun safes. She is still laughing while beating me with the pillow from the couch.

The ending by itself is worth the ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ I gave it.

Keep Writing

JH4Fun

How do you keep a idiot in suspense?

5 Stars as I could not help but laugh . Keep up the good work

FIVE

A little short for my taste but still a 5 for creativity.

Five every day and night

A nce teaser

[09.04.23]

Fun und Funny!

11/10!!!!!

very nice

Every time I stumble onto this story it puts a smile on my face. I am honestly jealous of the author writing it, but then if I wrote it I would not have the pleasure of reading it. Well done and thank you!

Right on target! Sorry, could resist.

I like happy endings.

Cute. But that really didn’t seem like 750 words. And I’m too lazy to count.

Cute story. Funny. Even if Sandy didn’t show up at her office, I bet Lisa has to change her panties.

Till death do us part indeed. Interestingly she said sorry but not the classic, "it was just sex" nor "I love you" that often follows it. But I'm guessing that was only because of the word limit.

Made me laugh. DMW aka Sumnut96

The person to most fear is the one who has nothing to lose. Good tale!

I have to give you full marks for that, great idea and as a 750, it just hung together so well.

And it made me laugh

Sweet revenge

That was the best laugh i have had in weeks. Thank you so much.

very funny , well done

Great laugh to start the day - well done.

Well, Damn! There’s one 750 word story I really wish would go at least a few hundred more words. Seriously, though, M+, a great story. I probably shouldn’t laugh at a woman about to have a tennis-ball sized hole blown in her but I couldn’t help myself. Thanks for a good laugh.

5🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟