All Comments on 'If Tomorrow Never Comes'

HA ha you are mean !

Now you can give us the 7500 version !

Oh that's right you'll never see this comment......

Just .... brilliant.

I was already laughing was you were winding up, then I guffawed aloud at your ending. Five stars. Just because.

Loved it!

For the 750 word limit, that was great. A lot of fun.

Thanks for the story,

Cog

BTB "KING"

Touché on the word count. Ditto on the story. Maybe another 750 or so from Lisa? Very nice - thanks.

Thought the banter was light and enjoyable for such a dark topic! Well done!

Killian

Great story! Please do a follow up!

Congratulations! And thank you.

I gave it a 5

750 Doesn't Mean The Story Has To End There! Does It?

Nice creative humor.

Well done!

It's amazing how clever some writers can be with just 750 words. You told a fun story and worked in a little humor to boot! Thank you.

I actually hope she doesn't die. Too neat and too many untangled knots.

Now that is a BTB concise and in a nutshell (well, shell casing might be better)

5/5

Love the conversation and love that his hands are clean.

Absolutely the best, most original (and effective) story I've ever read here in LW. Talk about BTB. You've just elevated it to a delicious art form.

Bravo, M&M, and keep 'em coming, please.

This story is so good one is disappointed when it ends because they are so engaged in it. Nice job and cuck free!!!!

I loved it, I often feel a bit 'deprived' after one of these 750 word stories but this one was a masterpiece! Great Job, Thank You 5***** I really enjoyed it.

Moreandmore rarely disappoints. I think these 750 word challenges are sometimes difficult for writers but m&m to be a master. This the best story I've read in this challenge.

Thanks. 5*

Ok, that got a good laugh out of me. 5* Good plot.

Just wow!

Clever. Thanks.

I loved the whole concept!

One damn perfect story. Several really good stories in this group, but this is the best.

Short and to the point.

...a great story. 5 stars. Thanx!

Loklie

750 and excellent. Like the 750, ‘Nuff said!

This was over the top good.

and great jokes are short.

Funny as shit. Hope it was meant to be.

Morbid, maybe........funny? Damn straight! Thanks for the read!

This is the best story of the night in my opinion. Just a near perfect short story.

5* Awesome! Short yet fun and intense. BTB with the dying, guntoting jilted wife dispensing justice. Write on!

5

Too good!

When you come to the end, you have to stop!

Omg, I love this short story. Laughed at the end 😀

5 from me still smiling says it all don't need any more

Loved this LW tale to bits!

Great short story; pulled a couple of chuckles out of me. Well done, thanks for posting.

Very nice indeed. To write a 750 word story is difficult enough. To write one that's a crowd pleaser in the LW's category is almost impossible. 5 stars.

Nice to see that some people know when to laugh. Thanks for the fun. 4*

LOL! Great story! 5 stars!

Happy Valentine's!!

.... and MORE! .... thanks!

Well. Some days you get the bear, and some days the bear gets you.........

Short, sweet, and to the point!

A lot😂

Exposed bitch knows what's coming,knows it's coming from the person she lied to and cheated on and has time to experience terror and perhaps regret. I just wish this story were longer so we could go along for the last ride.

Excellent.

'Nuff said.

Hilarious and dark. Well done. Guess wifey should have gotten a carry permit and practiced.

Please finish this one up, omg I was really enjoying it.

Too bad real life isn't like this.

Loved it esp. the ending.

Good story

Can I laugh loudly now

Absolutely GREAT, if too short, story!!!

Like your writing moreandmore. Stories are intelligent with good writing. Would love to see you or anyone else flesh out more of this excellent story.

maybe maybe maybe babe

You have an amazing knack for writing very original stories. Thank you. I thoroughly enjoyed this.

Nice job. Well done.

Great little ditty!

They actually do have pocket/purse sized pistols and revolvers that will put a damn big hole in anything. Try a 45-70 derringer for a start.

Still one of the best 750 word stories.

750 words. Clear and concise. Clever. Witty.

Also 5 stars.

But another story not well suited for the 750 word limit as you were forced to leave the story unfinished. Sure you tried to do it in a humorous way, but I'm not a fan of unfinished stories. This was unfinished.

Enjoyable, funny story.

Love it. A lot. Now I'll be awake half the night thinking of how things didn't work out like he thought and what interesting things happened.

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If at any time you want to do a second chapter ... I follow you so I'll get notified. Just saying.

I don't understand clowns who think that THEY know what the end of the story is. Is it because the obvious is beyond the scope of their imagination? The story was great - just as it is. Thank you for a humorous 750 words!

Great teaser!

Nice

Lol, this deserves an ending or at least another 750 word sequel. I really liked it. Good job!

You never fail to impress.

I think this remains my absolute favorite 750 word story and that includes all of mine. Well done!

@Just_Words

Thank you

Trust me when I tell you that I had as much fun writing it as you did reading it 😏

The only way to have a non-ending!

great story! The only thing that caught my attention was the fact that she chose to have an affair with a guy in his mid sixties. She felt to me like she was in her forties as married 18 years and I am guessing first marriage. I see why the boss would do a younger girl so with no answer I am going with maybe she did it for money and promotions etc and not that the guy was some awesome romantic lover.

"BOOM" would have been just one more word!

Partial story.

Ashes in a portable toilet. That's awesome!

Nice story, definitely a new twist. Would certainly make the soon to be ex-wife think/freak out for a few minutes. Wished I would thought of that a couple of years ago.

Good one! Made me laugh. Thanks!

Love your humor, m&m.

Keep 'em comin'.

Отлично!

Loved it

5/5

Love this one. The psychological torture was short lived but well deserved and delivered. Beautiful that Sandy will be removing the need for divorce.

M&M is a master of the psychological BTB. Unparalleled master.

Second time through. Loved it as much as the first time.

Story is just right in length and message. I wonder how it would feel to know you pissed someone off that doesn't feel constracted by "Jail" ?

Nice :)

Interesting story. And highly underrated. I’m gonna give it five stars just to correct that discrepancy some.

Very good.

Wicked awesome!

Arrrghhh!

Bad boy! Such a tease! Thank you so much for the literary edging. 5

Loved it.

Ed

Love it!

Naughty Naughty. Do it again.

Every time he sees his wife he should light a fire cracker to make her dive for cover, lmao!

Real satisfaction would come from staying on the line to listen to her pleading for her life to no avail. And shout out thanks to Sandy just before she blows the sluts head off.