All Comments on 'If You Like...'

Fun story! I've never been a pina colada fan, but I do love walks in the rain...

But, you have done it justice.

Well Done!!! 5

Excellent feel good story, nice twist, great ending... love is the winner. You made my day. Happy thanks:)

gave it away! As soon as I read it, I had a feeling I knew exactly where the story was going and it tracked almost perfectly with the song. You did a great job adapting the lyrics and extending them to tell the rest of the story. It was a bit shorter than I'd have liked, feeling it could have used a bit more backstory and character development, but 4 AM to sunrise doesn't give a writer that much time. Therefore, I gave it 4.6* and rounded up to 5* for the score. Very nice job!.

Like how you wove the song lyrics close enought to recognize but with enough wordsmithmanship (lol...) for the reader to wonder how your gonna fit in the next verse. Nice balance and elaboration on the ending. Also good call on the little bit of the "rest of the story" always a nice bonus to get a but of music trivia. 5 stars for sure.