All Comments on 'I'll Do It'

I absolutely love this story. I sincerely hope you won't keep us waiting on what happens once they go up those stairs.

Amazing story but I hate the start so much. "I want to have a BF" *laughs everyone away*

I mean girl u make us women look stupid.

Thanks for the ratings. Please also leave a comment. Let me know what you like and don't like about the story.

For context this story is a fictionalized version of an experience that a friend had when working in Florida for 12 months several years ago. Obviously names have been changed. She did tell me enough details to write the second and third installments so hold tight.

I'm not going to tell you the experience of mine that I had to confide in her to get her to tell her story! Then again maybe I will!!

Love it. The next installment should be called "Anywhere but Istanbul"

sooooo hot!!!

Wow, Olive! That is one of the hottest stories I have read in a LONG time! I am eager to read more!

Looking forward to the next chapter.

spectacular

Good god!

Olive, I've sent you a DM!

Hi All. Thanks for the comments and votes. Have had a few impatient requests for the next episode of this. I'm almost done with editing it. Will upload soon. In the mean time I've uploaded another one, you should have it as soon as the moderators approve it. 😘

I really hope there's going to be more, I love your writing.

If anyone is interested the moderators just released some minor edits to the above story.

This was fucking HOT! There was to be so many stories tied up in this fantasy! I really need to see how the relationship evolves with the 2 females. How much control does Caroline get? How much is given…

Does Caroline really like females to?

Please give us more

Lovely preise.

Nice story line.

Good set up.

Five stars.

I don't know about her being the boss of him too, kinda like the idea of them both being equally dominant

More please... Lets see where it goes for these characters...

Fantastic story. Following her inner thoughts brought this story to life. We get to experience her transformation.

Thank you.