by Frederick Carol
although i have read many storys this i would have to say was clearly something special.
its nice to see a diffrent approach taken.
a wonderful mixture of eroticism and hot sex! The buildup was handled adroitly and it got my breathing going. The images are wonderful. Keep up the good work, particularly with a sequel or two!
And can I borrow Anne for a while? Or Kathy?
Excellent - not many authors this good. Keep up the good work.
Lukas
Very classy story, keep up the good work. It is nice to read some class for a change.
Nothing like an older, more experienced woman! Great story!
The sexual talk was fine but I didn't like the segues from that to small talk. It lost continuity for me.
Fred,
Just finished the series "Change of Plans" and I'll Borrow Matt. I was surprised that Kathy didn't stay and "share" Matt with her MOM, as she said. Boy, that girl is unselfish. Anyway, please continue the saga/plot line. It still has a chapter or two left, don't you think?
This story reminds me of when I borrowed my daughter's boyfriend, except we never told her, or my husband.
although this one moves smoothly to the climax scene, it didn't have Kathy as a participant. So, the story can't be over ..... can it? Well, one way or the other, it has been a good ride. Wish I was there! Thanks for good erotica.