by Ashson
...when describing a male performing oral sex on a female. Fellatio only applies to a female performing oral sex on a male - sex education 101
Other than that, not bad -a bit more description would also help. @
He took she gave, husband left out in the cold. Is she a serial cheater now that she enjoyed her matting with husbands friend.
Fellatio? Maybe Sweetie has a VERY prominent clitoris?
Sweetie looks at the just-displayed pecker and immediately reports (silently ... only to 'we, the readers') about the degrees of vertical angle and hardness. OK. Maybe some realism, here ... a random Horny-Hubby-Buddy is average in endowment. NOPE! Next observation is that it IS a Humungous Hammer! Lucky Girl!
5* (if nothing else, the idea of orally mauling such an exceptional clit!)
Bad writing. Wife's a slut whore. Real friends wouldn't do that to another friends wife.
:-)
The author needs to fix typos and should know the difference between cunnilingus and fellatio.