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All Comments on 'I'll Need to Change the Sheets Pt. 02'

by ElectricBlue

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cmj711cmj711about 1 year ago

Delicious, kinky & fun!

ElectricBlueElectricBlueover 2 years agoAuthor

I've had a few requests to take the storyline back to just David and Bec, which I might do. I wanted to indulge myself, going all porno with Grace. Hey, what can I say?

muskyboymuskyboyover 2 years ago

Didn't fuck Bec! Felt like 1/2 a story as a result. Hope you have another chapter in mind. Thanks

winchesterfoxwinchesterfoxover 2 years ago
What a command you have:

Ideas. Language (…like resplendent trees…). Responses to comments. Thank you again for sharing.

muskyboymuskyboyover 2 years ago

Loved it, can't wait for the next installment. Like to see a little romance with Bec develop?

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanover 2 years ago

great series. writing, subject matter. More milking sex please

CharlieWanderingCharlieWanderingalmost 3 years ago

Superb. Absolutely superb.

ElectricBlueElectricBluealmost 3 years agoAuthor

No need to apologise. It's my story, I took it where I wanted to take it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

First installment had promise, now it just seems like an effort to go full harem mode. Lost interest, sorry.

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A writer of mostly urban erotica, with more café scenes than a classic French movie; occasional departures to more fantastic worlds, off planet and on.