All Comments on 'I'll Show You Boring'

Good story. I liked the non-erotic parts about the broken glass and the pizza. Even though this is erotica, it made the characters and situation seem more real. For a story this size don't add more though. We are here for the sex after alll LOL.

Good story for 1st time, look forward to more of your work :)

Very good story. Hopefully you will continue this story I think there is that can be told.

Masterpiece. Please keep writing.

Awesome first effort. Keep writing.

What ever your doing now....stop. Get straight back to your keyboard and start writing another story. An amazing first story. Descriptive, sexy, good characters, strong plot and believable dialogue. More please. Thank you.

Really enjoyed this, thanks for sharing your talent.

Amazing first story.

While there are some people on this site may be a bit picky regarding grammar and perspective or tense, a little bit of imperfection is not insurmountable. Not that I noticed any in your writing, just giving you some encouragement to let your work flow. Thank you.

Fantastic story, extremely well done! Keep writing!!

Yeah. No worries! Amazingly well done story.

Your writing skills suggest you’ve accomplished this before, many times, if not in this genre.

what a great story.

Very hot. I especially liked how you were thoughtful enough to post an author's note at the beginning for those who weren't into anal or squirting. Five stars and a favorite point!

the tag of anal...i hate anal

Did I miss something?

Mom was weird. Having hubby walk out can rarely be good, but I can hear her liver crying out from here.

Son was flat out squirrely-Rocky would be proud. Nerdy without the brains.

Totally awkward story, 2⭐️

Awesome story it was a very good read but you should continue until she gets her divorce from her asshole of a husband and they continue their love for each other and mother has his child! Gave it 5stars!!!!!!!!!!!

She should have let him dump one of those loads inside her fertile pussy , just another way to get back at her Boring husband!

Amazing man keep it up

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Really happy about the response so far. I'm not gonna lie, I had a bit of anxiety about posting this at all. I knew I liked it during my multiple read-throughs, but I was still pretty nervous that it might get brutally panned. I actually just read it again and noticed several errors I missed. That kind of peeved me, but at least they weren't too distracting.

At this time I don't really have any plans for making a series out of anything, but who knows. I am currently writing a brother/sister story, and I have several roughly outlined. I'll be honest and say that I'm not sure how long it will take. This story took me much longer than I anticipated due to the fact that I get very little in the way of private time to devote to this hobby. I did thoroughly enjoy writing it, so I will definitely find a way to continue to do so.

Again, really stoked about the positive reception and feedback. It's almost embarrassing how happy it made me actually. Thanks all!

This was a real good story loved how mother and son finally came together and mother really was a dynamo when it came too sex. You should have wrote more including her divorce from her cheating husband and taking him to the cleaners. And mother and son continue with their love for each other and her having his children. Gave it 5 stars.

Awesome story loved how mom seduced her son and then they continued to have sex! You should write further into this until mother gets pregnant she was only in her 30s!!!!!!!!!! Gave it 5 stars!!!!!!!!

Great story.....part 2 please?

What was the thinking behind this story ? I'm going with "how can I write about the most annoying boy/child in the world ever ??". Well you nailed it, congratulations.

Capital! Great story and well written. I very much enjoyed the pace and the sexual tension. And… it was hot as hell.

Holy Fuck! This was so good!!! I was expecting bdsm or something but this was perfect as is. Loved it