All Comments on 'Illicit Desires Ch. 04'

well done!

whatever else you do dont stop continue please, mekalai still needs a lot more tutoring which I am sure you will agree!!! well done again my friend

Hey, please write a story of

1. Muslim father in law with his daughter in law (in natural way like 'A thakur and his bahu')

2. father in law with his daughter in law's mother.

3. old man with his old maid

4. A muslim moulovi with his wife.

your writing is good because of your realistic presentation.

Having lived for long and given to observation I feel compelled ot remark. Does life follow fiction or vice versa I wonder, as I know of a near identical case. It is unlikely but perhaps Misterwho too knows. Be that as it may a fascinating story well told!