by Pervdaddy666
Great for a short story , but you should have used Mum to spice it up.
Hell, I really liked that one, it's a bit short but that's kind of what makes it so steamy. I'd luv to see it continued, maybe with a little more description of the protagonists' outer appearances...
missing some essential description of daddy and daughter's physical attributes. Too short, but who knows
You are in serious need of help. Go and see your doctor who will hopefully be able to refer you to a trained professional. You are sick.
the story, short as it is, was well done and well written. The details of the "act" itself were good too. But you could have taken it further!! The son could get involved, both taking her, the son alone with her, all sorts of thing. Come on, write more of it, and make them long.
gormless ? Define, please.
As a true tale, it started well, but what about the aftermath?
How'd they start, continue, etc. 1998-2007, something must have happened or changed.