by CorbinC
Interesting to see the changing dynamic between Monica and 9. Monica is almost a Mailgirl now.
Very good indeed. Trials and tribulation always occur in relationships, this one is a bit off center, so I do suppose it will = a very good Xmas party...;) Thank you!
I though you have forgotten this since it was so long since we read anything from you, all this was pretty good except when Monica called her momma and told her about what her and 9 did with Jill, I would not be so understanding in fact I would have been mad at Monica and 9 for it but hey that is just me
It's fiction! You know, like not real. It was a delightful story that was pure fun to read.
I will say the misspelled words and verbs in the wrong tense were somewhat distracting, but it didn't stop me from reading every chapter, and looking forward to more!
Great storytelling. At first, I found it hard to accept the "mailgirl" premise, but as the story went on, that ceased to be a problem. The depth and realism of the major characters is compelling. I am very curious to see how Joyce evolves.
I’ve enjoyed all the musical quotes but I LOVED the Irving and Puzzo shoutouts.