All Comments on 'I'm Dreaming of a Hot Christmas'

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SouthernCrossfireSouthernCrossfireover 2 years ago

Another great story, S&F! I enjoyed the interaction between the couple, and the nail polish offer was a real gem. Dad’s visit and possible transformation was a very nice touch, too. He’d come to grips with the fact that his daughter was grown and successful and that he hadn’t been there for her as he should have been to help along the way. The deeds were nice, but his apparent commitment leaves hope for his long-term relationship with Peyton as it does for hers with Dash. Excellent work!

NYBossNYBossover 2 years ago

Thoroughly enjoyed the story

naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4uover 2 years ago

What a great Christmas for all those people in need. A great read that embodies the spirit of Christmas, stripping away the commercialism it has become. Of course hot sex helps too. Best of luck in the competition and have a merry Christmas

LingeringAfterthoughtLingeringAfterthoughtover 2 years ago

This was soooo nice! Great work!

ElectricOutcast2XElectricOutcast2Xover 2 years ago

I think you wrecked the innocence of a childhood, but I could imagine him maybe getting the story of how the real Santa Claus used to be alive but has long since been dead for thousands of years.

Auspat2121Auspat2121over 2 years ago

Great story thank you.

Lee2012Lee2012over 2 years ago

Very well put together with an excellent plot. Transitioning was superb with enough sex to keep us pervs occupied. 😎

My vote fir best.

Naughtyone4uandmeNaughtyone4uandmeover 2 years ago

Outstanding story, I even had tears reading this towards the end. Thank You Kindly for this beautiful story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Well done. The right touches. Terrific. Thanks.

billybardbillybardover 2 years ago

Absolutely wonderful!

Loved all the little small bits of filler and side stories that you merged into the story.

One of your best (and you have had several over the years).

Cheers.

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunover 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you for all your kind comments. Peyton and Dash were a fun couple to create, and I really enjoyed writing their story, especially when it's so well received.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Hot sex after a long tease, people doing good work in the Christmas spirit, romance, and a happy ending.....what more could one ask for? Easy 5 stars. Hope you win.

Richard1940Richard1940over 2 years ago

Great story, full of Christmas spirit 5*s of course.

And a Merry Christmas and Happy New year to you

saracelestesaracelesteover 2 years ago

Really sweet holiday story!

davepepperburydavepepperburyover 2 years ago

I really loved this. I'm a sucker for the more romantic tales and this was just what I needed; an enjoyable long read to sink into and spend some time in the company of good characters being scripted by a quality wordsmith.

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunabout 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you so much for choosing this as a Reader's Choice Nominee Award for December 2021. So glad you enjoyed it.

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks again for choosing this story as a nominee for the Readers' Choice Awards for 2021, in the Mature category. There are so many good stories nominated this year, that I'm honored to be included.

brian_scoobybrian_scoobyalmost 2 years ago

Very, very nice sweet story! A very enjoyable read! Thank-you

Ravey19Ravey19almost 2 years ago

Very sweet love story. Thought there might be more with her brother but that's a minor point.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Another story where the bitch is talking about the older MC, about his age and just being a friend/boss to her gossiping slut friend, that he overhears

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Dash came to his senses and proposed - wish there was more

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