All Comments on 'I'm Going to Make You Come'

I loved it, althought i wish caleb had stayed i feel bad for sarah..i love it because its those back in the day westerns...

I really appreciate it.

I feel sorry for Sarah, also. I hated leaving her in a lurch. I plan a sequel, but even after all this time, I still can't decide in which direction it should go. I'm open to suggestions! I've had several ideas tossed at me, but when I start writing, nothing seems to just "fall into place". I'll keep working on it, though!

Thanks again.

BlueDaisy you wrote one hell of a story. The conflict Sarah went through reminded me of Diane Lane in the movie Unfaithful. Beautifully written. D'Angela Carr

I loved the conflict between Sara and herself. Please write a sequel.

This was a great story and well written. I loved it, because it gave a clear indication of a woman being satified, by a friend and not by her husband, giving her a chance to compare. I think of the women who have married for years, had babies and had never cum. Her Caleb let her know what she had been missing for the last 6 months.

How about a sequel?

That was really good, expanding it would, could lead to a winner - published!

Maybe go where she starts to participate a little, slowly, build their relationship , then have Caleb come back - he's got unfinished business. And he and M can build their friendship and maybe start a partnership over the ranch, and progresses to a more intimate nature in the marriage start to build tight friendship, leading to polyamorous relationship.

SEQUEL!!!!!!!

I really liked the concept of this. We don't see many 1890 house on the prairie type of stories on here.