by blastinaglass
I think i would kiss Bryson in the neck & wisper in his ear:
Please prepare me well because this is my first time.
I can't believe I'm agreeing with Dinkyboots, but I also have serious reservations on this one. Lots of positive comments here, but I can't see why our hero has any kind of a crush on this guy at all - there's nothing there to like, never mind love.
Dinkyboots, you obviously don't understand erotica completely.
some people take this shit to far.?
Damn... I was reading this on my phone at a bus stop, and when I got to the part where Bryson described what he wanted to do to Noah, damn me... I blushed furiously right there and couldn't stop the grinning... People were looking at me like "what's wrong with this kid?" I had to postpone the reading.
Difficult to tell when it's a win-win situation. Writing isn't the easiest thing to accomplish ... And do it best. They want the Next one now, so you post what you have ... and some will still complain it's too short. Not everybody has long ones. So let'm be satisfied with really good short ones. You've got my vote! So far, your writing portrays a fine image for Gay community - love everyone and don't point fingers. That's how I feel.
I AM SO IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY SO FAR.
Please make this sexy story longer =]
I'm with a few of the other commentators, I think longer chapters would be better. x
this looks to be a REALLY interesting story...cant wait for the next chapter...and i agree...it would be fun if your stories would be a little longer if you're ok with it...thx
I really liked the story but I would really like to see more pages in your chapters. You are creating a fan base and we want more. Hope you get another chapter posted soon.
This story is great, hot too but short. You should write your stories longer(2 pages at least).
Great story... i can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for sharing it.
About halfway through I was wondering how you would keep this interesting since it seemed like Noah would fall into Bryson's arms but then you threw me got a loop. I especially loved the slap. Lolol.
I was so glad to see this chapter! Written on a whim? what a whim. I look forward to seeing what happens. I am loving this series.
I love the characters and the story. I can't wait to see what happens.
This story is off to a great start and I cannot wait to see what else you have in store!
Great story so far. Only wish the chapters came quicker and longer. Keep up the good work.
Fantastic Story, it made me smile.
Love it, Love it, Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh boy, it's gonna hit the fan now!! I saw the note on the other chapter and have been waiting for this.