All Comments on 'I'm Possessive of My Mother'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Thanks for contributing. Obviously part of a slow burn story. You might want to warn your readers that. Not sure you need to tell us that the chapter is done because that is obvious when you start the next one. Keep going, I'm sure this will get better.

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooabout 2 years ago
Masterfully crafted

So realistic it's as if the reader is there.

Thank you for such a beautiful story

cageysea9725cageysea9725about 2 years ago

Education.

Get it, then use it.

mross2004mross2004about 2 years ago

would like to see a part 2

muskyboymuskyboyabout 2 years ago

1/4 of a story....

maxx308maxx308about 2 years ago

I have no idea of what I just read. Is this it or is this part 1 of a series? You give no indication in either the story title or at the end that there will be a continuation.

No score as this story made no sense, at least to me it didn't.

VitoMartonoVitoMartonoabout 2 years agoAuthor

Appreciate the feedback, friends. Next part of it will be out soon, if Literotica allows for it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I like the build up. Just don’t drag it out too long. It would be interesting with a risk of pregnancy. Or mom actually does get with child by her son.

nil_r2nil_r2about 2 years ago

Good start, please continue to its logical conclusion

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I loved it. The slow build up is great. Please more!!!!

mmnazixmmmmnazixmmabout 2 years ago

Remember we have similar story with the same plot.. anyhow nice to read again

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

As you said, I hate a tease.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

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