All Comments on 'Imaginary Friend Ch. 01'

interesting idea but it felt like to quick of a read maybe add a bit more deatial?

I agree with the other anon, more detail is needed in your plot. It just felt like it was missing a bit of something that I can't quite articulate into words.

I would love to see how his imaginary boyfriend deals/competes against the real thing. Some of the best sex most of us have ever experienced with ourselves is thinking about someone who may or may not have actually existed, or may or may not have known we existed.

Also, please watch the grammar (your, you're and there, their and they're).

so either he's crazy or the imaginary friend is less imaginary than he thought (i.e. non corporeal being). hope he's not crazy, but how can you have a meaningful relationship with a spirit?