by LucidlyConfused
very nice opening chapter, can't wait for more !!!!!!!!
submission and obedient devotion to another woman is the best !
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carrie
any ms taylors out there, you can find me on yahoo les_carrie
I wish you the best of luck finding who you are looking for.
Sometimes fantasy pieces like this are hard to follow, but you did a great job 'blurring the line'. Nicely done!
A very well-written story with two interesting characters. Excellent sexual tension. Yes, the transitions between reality and fantasy were a little too subtle, but that's a minor issue. I would enjoy reading more of Tina's adventures.