All Comments on 'Imaginary Mistress'

by LucidlyConfused

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
mmmmmm

very nice opening chapter, can't wait for more !!!!!!!!

submission and obedient devotion to another woman is the best !

pet

carrie

any ms taylors out there, you can find me on yahoo les_carrie

LucidlyConfusedLucidlyConfusedalmost 9 years agoAuthor
Thank you

I wish you the best of luck finding who you are looking for.

EmilyWestEmilyWestalmost 9 years ago
Gorgeous ;-)

Love it

xeriscapartistxeriscapartistalmost 9 years ago
Nice!

Sometimes fantasy pieces like this are hard to follow, but you did a great job 'blurring the line'. Nicely done!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
I am the one who's confused

When does the fantasy end?

visioneervisioneeralmost 9 years ago

A very well-written story with two interesting characters. Excellent sexual tension. Yes, the transitions between reality and fantasy were a little too subtle, but that's a minor issue. I would enjoy reading more of Tina's adventures.

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