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Click hereI meant to trim and neaten, to shape it into something pretty, maybe a trail. I'd imagined showing it to Claire; imagined her cooing approval. Imagined spreading my legs wide in front of her. The trail was gone. I'd shaved it all.
I blushed as I realized that my first thought had been to wonder what Claire would think, that I'd pictured her smiling, laughing with delight, her eyes wide with surprise and admiration. But I was also pushing a finger between my lips while I did so. It was so wrong, such a terrible transgression, but I was too turned on to care, too turned on to stop.
My fingertips were slick, but not from the soap. I thought about the night before, the way her jaw hinged as she came, her hands touching her nipples, the moment her leg touched mine, the shock of realization that she was masturbating in my bed, the vibrations of her shoulder movements. I thought about how badly I'd wanted to cum after watching her give in to her own pleasure, how my own pleasure took me by surprise. I stroked my clit, while recalling Claire, I wondered for the hundredth time if she had simply been pleasuring herself, or if she was "putting on a show." The idea that she was doing it for me to watch brought me closer to my own release. My mind seemed to chase after itself.
I again pictured myself straddling Claire's face, I imagined her looking at my shaved pussy while someone watches us. I felt myself losing control. The idea of us being watched is so powerful I felt like I might swoon.
The first jerk was like a cable tied to some part of me deep inside I couldn't touch.
"Oh God CLAIRE!" I called out, shocking myself more than my fantasies, my voice was loud and clear and real. My orgasm blew my shock and embarrassment into pieces, it left me suspended in pleasure, at least for a moment...
*For those of you rereading these stories this is for you: on 03/27/23 I uploaded my final edit version of this story for moderation. It's about six hundred words longer than the original. Most of the changes are simple copy edits, but all are intended to turn up the heat, and to more clearly reveal the original intent.
- COMMENTS
NoLongerAnonabout 1 month agoIt is also interesting to reread this with foreknowledge of Sarah's past, although I forget exactly which part of the first two chapters made me think this.
SiteNonSiteabout 1 month agoAuthorI’m glad to hear that foreknowledge adds to the story, Cidesa. I don’t think Sarah’s blindness to herself was deliberate. I think seeing herself in new ways, in the ways Claire sees her, is painfully hard for her - or at least that’s how it feels in my imagination. Meanwhile, I am so happy to know you are rereading, that the story is drawing you back in. Thanks so much for leaving a comment.
Cidesaabout 1 month agoIt is interesting rereading this chapter bearing in mind Claire later telling Sarah these two days where when she became romantically/sexually attracted to Sarah. With that in mind, it is clear how hard Claire is flirting, and just how clueless (deliberately or not) Sarah was about it all
SiteNonSiteover 1 year agoAuthorI really love that Sarah would fuck Oscar for Claire too - that’s a little moment that I don’t think anyone else has pointed to before _robin, I’m so glad you enjoyed it. I am working on Chapter 15, but keep coming back to these early chapters for inspiration, but also for orientation, to remember who Sarah and Claire are. I very much hope you will want to follow the arc of their affair to the end… which is getting closer.
_robinover 1 year agoI love, love, love this. So hot. And the writing, so sharp and on the money. I’d never heard the phrase bridge-and-tunnel before, but I immediately knew what it meant. LOL! New, unexpected angle on intimacy & sexy - when Claire says the old guy in the restaurant only wants to fuck Young Sarah, and Sarah says she will put out for Claire. OMG.
GaiusPetroniusover 1 year agoYour descriptions are exceptional. Whether you're describing Sarah's neighborhood and walk-up building or Claire's self pleasuring you paint vivid word-pictures.
I love the steady unfolding.
5 stars.
SiteNonSiteover 1 year agoAuthorSorry, but I’m not a late-Boomer Librandesire, (loved watching Dick and Laura with mom thought), maybe just a bit of a late bloomer? I’m not sure how to explain my desires. Perhaps we’ve become to invested in origin stories. Starting with first The Stronger Girl story I decided to resist the urge to explain the origins of desire, focusing instead on their power to overcome shame and guilt in the moment, which I find endlessly interesting. As for who I am writing for, in general, a younger more precious version of myself maybe? I like to think about pleasing them, but also encouraging them - to be brave, to take care of themselves, to pursue their desires. With the Impact stories I was very much writing for ButteredCrumpet, and still am. I am very happy to know you enjoy the writing, so do I. It’s a wonderful escape and rewarding in-and-of itself. XOSNS
Librandesireover 1 year agoI've read Impact 01 and 02 and both are excellent. You're writing is exceptional. I'm a straight man and I don't often read lesbian stories. There's lot of variation of course in lesbian lit, as there is with any other, but reading it offers a useful reminder that, in sex, we're not really that different.
You don't say how old you are but by some of your references I'm guess that you're a late boomer. Mary Tyler Moore and Dick Van Dyke, and "bridge and tunnel". Assuming I'm right, I find it interesting that you're fond of (or seem to be) a bald pussy. Most depictions of nude women in the 70s-90s revealed bush. I prefer to eat a bald cunt and it's a preference I've had for a very long time. I'm curious to know if you've always preferred smooth (assuming you do) or whether there was some transitional event that changed your tastes. I say "assuming" because you may be writing with a contemporary audience in mind, for which the standard is smooth.
You're a fabulous writer. I envy your talent.
SiteNonSitealmost 2 years agoAuthorCriticalAnon. I’m glad to know you find the story interesting. Some things I do for my readers, for their pleasure. Something I do for myself, to stretch and reach, for novelty.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoVery interesting story but with regards to the changing of the tenses, we’ll I have to say: first, it is entirely not needed, second, it’s distracting and finally, you’ve been inconsistent in your use of the technique. The whole thing should have been in the past tense.
