by SiteNonSite
Next one, please? Tomorrow? Sarah has some baggage, doesn't she? Gonna be interesting to see you two work through that... 5*, this is easily the best thing I've read in a week!
SNS, although I know how the story goes when we work on it, I still love reading it when you publish it. You have so much talent and it is always a privilege to see it in action.
I certainly agree — please hurry to the next chapter. What started (and may finish) as a romantic comedy is morphing into something more. Yes, the storyline maintains a frivolousness — dialogue is sassy and fun, reflective moments revealing, and the fact that our two protagonists have not made wildly erotic love/sex is almost beyond belief. Love it. Yet, the developing relationship between these two believably/richly crafted characters is exactly what we would expect from the authors — there is an evolving dynamic that promises so much more. Rating is easy - 5 stars.
Thank you all for the wonderful feedback. We are as excited to post the next chapter as all of you. I’m pleased to see from the French comments that Claire has fans. (And yes, HWGT, Sarah has baggage, but all in all I think she is handling herself with an admirable grace.) I’m also pleased to know the slow boil is still exciting Migbird, that is after all what we are all here for…
Straight, older guy, who loves your stories. I read other erotica, but your stories are so good. It is the little things...describing her hair, smells, colors....all make for such good writing. Wish you could teach the others, that say they are women, but clearly men writing lesbian works...clinical and almost too descriptive with no build up or seduction...just brute force. Please keep writing.