Impact of Collision Ch. 05

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"I didn't even see the bar," I say with a gasp as I hand her back the glass. She stares at me over the rim as she drinks. "What do you think they were serving?" I wonder.

"Red Bull and vodka," she tells me with authority. "I'd stake my reputation on it."

The two of us are still soaked in sweat. Steam had been rising off Claire's shoulders and head as we walked across the street from the party to my building.

"You have a reputation?" I ask, smiling.

"I'm getting one," she tells me. "Especially the more time I spend with you."

"I don't know what you're talking about, I'm a good Catholic girl." I retort as I take the last gulp of water before turning to the sink to refill the glass.

"I'm a good Catholic girl too!" Claire pipes defensively.

"Somehow I think it's different," I tell her, thinking of the Algerian and the Norwegians. I hand her the glass, smirking.

"Perhaps," she concedes, perhaps knowing what I'm thinking. "Do you still have your uniform?"

"Yes! Do you?!"

"Of course!" Her laugh fills the kitchen. "Do you have it here?"

"No." I feel myself flushing at the idea of wearing my school girl uniform for Claire. I take the glass from her hand and drink, trying to cover over my embarrassment.

"Me neither..." she says, sounding a little wistful, but she's staring at my lips. We've been talking about nothing, as if nothing is happening, as if we are just two friends drinking water and I'm not about to kneel and eat her pussy.

"Come!" she orders, turning off the kitchen light. "Time for bed."

Claire leads me into my bedroom by the hand, stopping in front of the window and turning me around. She unzips the back of my dress, smoothing her hands over the damp skin as she pushes it off my shoulders and down my arms. I start to cover myself, raising my arms and preventing the dress from falling, but all it takes is a small "tsk" from Claire and I drop them and shimmy out of the dress for her.

She unclasps my bra and reaches beneath my arms to slide her finger over my bare breasts, cupping them, hefting their weight appreciatively as my bra falls to the floor. The lights are on and I'm nervously looking out the window. She is pulling at my nipples. We are no longer pretending nothing is happening, I suppose. The crowd across the street has dispersed, and the windows across the way are dark, but still I can't help but imagine watchers as her thumbs slip into the waistband of my panties.

"It's not fair," she tells me, pushing them down.

"What's not fair?" I ask, standing on my toes and again shimmying for her.

"That you have such perfect breasts AND a great ass," she says matter of factly - as if we were trying on clothes or preparing lunch, not stripping me bare in front of the whole city.

"It's too big," I tell her, thinking of the way it sticks out.

"Are you fucking mad?" she asked, grabbing my ass in her hands, her fingers curling like claws. "Have you never looked at yourself?!"

I step out of my panties as she releases me, and turns me towards her. Her cheeks are flush as her eyes glint with excitement.

"You threatened to behead a man for calling my ass fat."

"But you-"

"Seriously!" she says, slapping my ass hard enough to make a loud crack.

"EEP!" I call out and jump, more from surprise than pain.

"And these! They're magnificent!" she complains. I had moved my hands up to cover myself but she pushed them away so she could look at me.

"They don't sag at all, and are the most beautiful shape. It's like you were drawn by a teenage boy."

She reaches around my waist to squeeze my ass, pulling us together and lifting me onto my toes. Her brow creases as she looks hard at me, staring at my lips.

"Et ta bouche, ta belle bouche," she says hungrily, as she bites her bottom lip.

I look away, feeling self conscious under the harsh glare of her appraising gaze. I reach for the hem of her little black dress hoping it will distract her and she releases me. She makes soft sounds of complaint as I jerk at the little shift with shaking hands. She lifts her arm and shows me the little zipper hidden in the seam along her side. The pull is a black tear drop. I lower it exposing a 12 inch slit of pale sweaty skin along her flank. With the waist no longer crimped I can pull the damp silk up over her sweaty hair. She is glorious in her lingerie, standing proudly for me and whoever might be looking at my window as I drop the damp dress to the floor.

"You can't go home in that," I whisper, as I guide her with a hand on her arm, turning her around. My voice sounds scared. "It's soiled."

"Maybe you can lend me something to wear?" she asks. Her voice is playful.

"You're soaked," I scold, as I unclasp her bra and she turns back around, facing me as I peel it off. It's black lace, so fine it's almost almost diaphanous - such a beautifully fragile little thing, so exquisitely made. I dream of being able to wear things like this.

"You like this, don't you?" She asks, as my fingers trail the delicate lace. "In French, it is called le soutien-gorge."

I think this 'soutien-gorge', exquisite on its own, perfectly captures and frames her engorged nipples, it is like art, or even porn. I think of how I should learn more French, of how happy that would make Claire.

Her skin glistens and her erect nipples shine, dark and almost oily looking. She arches and twists for me. I look down at her belly, admiring her underpants, they match her bra. "You always have such wonderful lingerie."

"My mother bought these for me," she tells me. "They were a going away gift."

"She has wonderful taste," I tell her, putting my hands on her hips.

Keenly aware of the show we're giving anyone still awake, I drop slowly to my knees to take off her panties. Claire's belly is rising and falling with her hurried breath. I look up at her and she moans a little with delight, like she's been presented with sweets.

"My mother will adore you," she tells me as I hook my fingers in her panties.

"You really think so?" I ask shyly as I pull the little garment off her ass and down her thighs. "She won't think I'm a loud, crass American?"

"No, not my Young Sarah," she says as I bow at her feet. "She will see what I see."

"I would like to meet your mother, one day, '' I say, bussing her soft little bush with my lips. I'm gripping the back of her thighs tight. Her skin is slick with sweat. She fingers my scalp, gulping air. It's been a long day and she smells strong. I put out my tongue, preparing to eat her pussy right here next to the window with the lights on. She's still in her heels, and shuffles her feet wide, giving me entrance. Her thighs are wet against my face. She's hot against my tongue, but I can feel her swaying and jerking for balance, her legs are shaking with the effort to stay upright.

She makes a small petulant sound and pulls me back.

"I can't," she whines, sounding winded. "It's too much. I'll fall. I can't..."

I stand and lead her to my bed, letting her fall back onto the bed, feet spread wide on the floor. I start to undo the straps of her shoes. Claire is up on her elbows, smiling at me as I do. As soon as I free the first foot she pulls it onto the bed, bending her knee and letting it fall to the side, in a lewd display. Taking off her other shoe I kiss the sole of her bare foot before standing.

I stand and turn to shut off the lights, but she stops me.

"No."

I turn back and look at her. The curls at the corner of her mouth are still there, but something in her eye is unyielding. She sees my eyes glance at the open shades. She shakes no.

"Let them watch my beautiful Young Sarah, I know you like being watched."

I feel the color rise making my face hot. I'm not drunk enough for this. There's a trembling in my chest as I turn back and cross to her. Crawling between her legs onto the bed it feels like something very immense and infinitely heavy is spinning out of control. Pressing my knees against the backs of her spread thighs, my arms bridging her body, our lips almost touching. I'm dripping wet, we both are.

"What happened on the dance floor?" she asks. "You almost fell."

My stomach clenches with shame. I consider lying, telling her I had a cramp, but remember the faces of the girls around us watching me, remember their smiles as we'd left. They'd all known. Claire certainly knows.

"I came," I confess. She's looking up at me, her eyes narrow, studying me. My face feels like it's on fire. "I had an orgasm."

"In front of everyone? All those girls..." she says, her expression opaque. I can't tell if she's shocked or amused. "I think Young Sarah is an exhibitionist slut. What kind of good Catholic girl does that?"

"I- I-," I stutter.

"Show me how you're a good girl," she tells me.

The word "slut" is still ringing in my ear, hearing her speak it, even soft and kind, fills me with dread. I feel tears filling my eyes as I think of the girls watching me, the looks on their faces, the way I made a show of myself.

'I am a slut,' I think. I dip my head until my mouth is just beside her ear.

"Tell me what you want," I beg. "I'm good. Tell me what to do and I'll do it. Anything you want."

"Your mouth," she whispers in my ear. "I want your mouth on me, Sarah, I want you to go down on me again. Eat my pussy."

I'm kissing her mouth as she murmurs her orders. My name fills our mouths. My tongue licks her lips as they shape the word "pussy."

Our tongues play and her arms wrap my shoulders, pulling me into a deep kiss. She moans, filling my mouth with a rich smoky flavor of ramps, red wine and cigarettes. I think of Minter's paintings, the obscenely large tongues, the beautifully painted lips, darkly freckled cheeks. But then, Claire starts pushing me down.

Traveling down her chin and neck; I pepper her with kisses. Stopping to enjoy the feel of her clavicle held between my lips, so delicate and fine. I maw at her "beauty bone" for a moment, softly with my teeth, but Claire presses me to move on, using more force now.

Her skin is hot and salty with sweat. Her breast fills my mouth, my tongue circles her nipple.

"Fuck! FUCK!" she hisses, squirming beneath me. I suck, her hands grip the tops of my shoulders, clutching almost painfully as I nurse. "Jesus Sarah!"

"MmmmMmmMm," I moan in protest as her hands bear down.

"Enough! Do as I say! Fucking eat my pussy!" She spits, shocking me. I pull my lips away in surprise as she grabs me by the hair, "Fucking do it bitch! Lick my fucking cunt!"

Part of me is thunderstruck by Claire's crude outburst, wondering at it and afraid, yet I all but jump down the bed to lick her pussy, rushing to force my tongue into her in a show of obedience. I'm hit with her taste - strong and sour, but I push on.

"Nom de Dieu de putain de bordel de merde de saloperies de connards d'enculé de ta mère!"

More than just swearing, she is pulling at my hair with angry jerks, fucking my face with her hips. I'm flooding her with saliva, washing her with my tongue.

"Suck it!" she storms, her voice rising, almost hysterical. "Show me how you eat my pussy!"

I'm almost panicked to do what she tells me, making a sloppy mess as I frantically lick, bobbing my head as fast as her grip on my hair will allow, sucking her with all my might. My tongue feels like it might cramp.

"Slut!" The word lands like a slap. "Rubbing your cunt. You love this, you love being my slut."

I realize she's right, that without knowing it, I've been fingering myself. I feel a pang of guilt, wonder if I should stop but I look at her, and see how much she enjoys seeing me this way.

We're looking at each other, my lips wrapped around the tips of my tongue and her clitoris. I'm sucking like a baby, compressing the little muscle against the swollen prominence, dragging my tastebuds up the slick underside, then forcing it back down, over and over.

Claire's eyes are glittering, wide like they might overflow. She's baring her teeth in pure animal pleasure.

"Eih! Eih! Eih! Eih!" Her body is hot in my hands, slippery with sweat.

"AaaayyyAHHH!" She bellows, throwing back her head and thrusting her hips upwards. I raise myself onto my knees and finger myself while looking down on her as she bucks and twists, the movements of her limbs almost like punches and kicks. My hand is a blur making lewd wet noises and my breath is short mechanical bursts.

"AH!"

"AH!"

"AH!"

"AH!"

Claire is humping her hips up at me hard. I have to move my face with her thrusts so I don't bash her with my teeth or get a fat lip.

"Fck!"

"Fck!"

"Fck!"

"FUCK!"

"FUUUUUEEEE!!"

Shoulders and arms on the bed, hips and knees in the air Claire floods my mouth. Her neck is bent and she is staring down the length of her sweat drenched belly at me, her face a rictus mask of pleasure so intense it looks like pain. For a moment she is frozen like that silent. Even her ribs clutched and tense her breath all expelled. I'm still sucking, my lips turned out and spread wide.

Claire is watching me finger myself as her own breathing calms and her limbs relax and her belly goes soft.

I drop my head and rest my sweaty head on the sodden flesh of her belly, lowering my mouth back to her cunt as I try and catch my breath. Claire is watching me. She pets my hair, moving it aside so we can see each other. I put out my tongue and lap at her, licking and sucking. I had wanted to cum with her, but I'm not disappointed because I know now Claire isn't done; she can go again.

My fingers are working over my clit slowly as I suck, I can feel my own orgasm building as I feel her breathing change, as she moves from recovering from her last orgasm to building towards her next. I am in awe of her, of her appetite, of her power.


At brunch it's as if nothing has happened. Just two girlfriends nursing our hangovers with coffee and Bloody Marys while we share the Sunday Times. Claire is anxious to read the feature on Sophie Calle she's holding, but excited to see our piece with the census data I'm showing her.

"It's beautiful," she tells me, I hold up the page so she can see the full layout. "Really, so smart Sarah."

I can't help but blush with pride, which makes Claire smile and fuss.

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FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyover 1 year ago

Oh yes they doing well and it feels not like speeding more just taken time exploring enjoying talking eating tasting smiling sharing , just name it and this feels sooooo good just reading this slow burning get together ...... Just lovely

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DdaltonDdaltonover 1 year ago

Love this series and I hope you continue it! I do think we need to see Sarah get off a little more, and sometime, she needs to say no to Claire, but with a smile!

SiteNonSiteSiteNonSiteabout 2 years ago

It seems that at least part of expressing sadness and disgust is performative, since no one has reached out to ButteredCrumpet or I to express these feelings privately, and as you acknowledge, ArmyGal33, the same thing has already been said any number of times.

Many readers have reached out privately because they are confused - which is understandable. Sarah’s POV is limited, but you don’t even know all she knows, all you know is what she tells you. That is by design. It’s meant to be part of the fun. For myself, I enjoy the feeling of being lost within a story and trying to orient myself, to guess where the author is heading. I enjoy it even more when an author truly surprise me.

But maybe that’s not the problem either. Perhaps the problem is you want a RomCom with pornographic sex scenes rather than cut ways to fireworks. That’s not what we are doing. I really enjoy pornography because of the way it places bodies front and center. So rather than a RomCom with the sexy bits showing, this is an opportunity to tell a love story through the sex. That means the sex is the conflict. The sex is the misunderstanding. The sex is the catharsis.

I have no idea if ButteredCrumpet and I will succeed with this, but it’s a pleasure to try. It’s been confusing and at times a little scary (there have been tears), but it’s also a very fun challenge.

I wish rather than pearl clutching you had read our responses to the other comments like yours and given us the benefit of the doubt. Having gotten this far into the story, I’d hope you’d want to see it through, I’m sorry you don’t, but I do hope you find something else to read that’s more to your liking.

ArmyGal33ArmyGal33about 2 years ago

I know it’s been said several times already, but I was saddened and confused by the turn this story has taken. There was zero indication this was coming, and without consent, it’s plain verbal abuse. My face is still screwed up in confusion, and honestly, disgust. I was enjoying this series up to this point.

NoLongerAnonNoLongerAnonover 2 years ago

I have hesitated about commenting on this chapter. I didn't like the power dynamic in this chapter and my first reaction was to dislike Claire for it. I hope that I'm not wrong when I have noticed glimpses of caring and vulnerability underneath her exterior. I'm stopping short of calling this abuse, because so far I see Sarah as a willing participant. However, I am worried that Sarah is so in thrall to Claire that she would do anything Claire asked.

ButteredCrumpetButteredCrumpetover 2 years agoAuthor

I'd like to thank you all for taking the time to read these chapters and respond. I have enjoyed reading your comments, even the challenging ones.

To all those who have said that this story is heading down the D/S path and it's not what you signed up for - I'm sorry you feel that way, but I'm sure you can find another story that will float your boat. I want to thank you for your time with us, I sincerely hope that you do come back for the rest of the journey.

I do not want you all to get the wrong idea that this is a D/S story, because it's not. Until now, I hadn't wanted to impose my view of the characters as I want this to be a journey of discovery for you, that said I hope you can be open minded to both women, they may do things you do like, they may not be what you imagine them to be, but they are as perfectly imperfect as characters; flawed people.

I will let you into my views, personally I hate Rom-Coms. I despise the manufactured nature of their meetings, the contrived nature I've met this person they are so wonderful - oh wait they're trying to shut me down. I loathe that the paramours are often in direct competition and that is where the hurdles manifest - someone has to lose. I detest how everything is so obvious to everyone else but the couple. I abhor the "airport dash" (God couldn't help you if you cut in front of me - and worse if you cause my flight to be delayed). Just like in a Rom-Com, Fate intercepted and ensured that it was the genre assigned to me for the micro-fiction contest which birthed this story. No matter how much I hated Rom-Coms, the thing that makes this pleasurable for me is writing it with SiteNonSite, that and considering it more of a Rom-Cum (props to SiteNonSite for coming up with that term). I would not want to be doing this with anyone else.

The way I see this story, is it's a story of love, a new love, a challenging and thought provoking love, an undefined love, a confusing love, a love of art, a love of food, a messy love, a sexy love, a love of friends. It is complicated and messy and at times it can be confusing and frustrating. Sometimes I want to reach into the page and shake some sense into Sarah, she is so intelligent, but at times is so naive and inexperienced. It is nothing more than two women who have had chance meetings getting to know each other better in many ways. There are power imbalances in this relationship, but in my view many relationships have an imbalance of power (which doesn't imply D/S) and that power may shift - or not. Things can get said and done in the heat of a moment, which throws all that into a tailspin. That's why these characters are fascinating (to me) - they are flawed.

Something SiteNonSite said in a comment on their post, that had resonated with me, was them talking about their pleasure of confusion: "the pleasure that comes from a limited POV, from depending on a not entirely reliable narrator."

I will reiterate that this is a story by SiteNonSite & I, we write this for our enjoyment and chose to share it with you. I could go on about how much love and respect I have for SiteNonSite and how it is a privilege to be able to do this with them, to learn from them, to watch their writing process and to have their constant support and encouragement... but I digress, this is not intended to be my love letter to them.

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To the anonymous voyeuristic reader who lives across the street from Claire, in regards to the clothes, to be fair they do have more than one outfit, but you caught them on a night they just ended up at Claire's place, it was unplanned, so poor Sarah didn't have clothes at Claire's place. In regards to your D/S requests or fantasy, sorry it's not where this is headed, but at least you have a room with a view.

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Ash_legend, thank you for your concerns. I hope that we don't turn you off too much, but I will say this, the next chapters will be a little tumultuous.

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Migbird, the stage "show" concept is somewhat interesting. I have previously mentioned that I see parts of this story as a movie in that way it is so visual. There are a lot of references to artists who have provided some level of inspiration. This chapter Pretty/Dirty was also the title of an exhibition of Marilyn Minter (the artist talk). I know we took our sweet time to get to the highly erotic sex, I hope the long tease was worth that wait.

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Billyslate, I am curious to understand how you view Sarah's character as having changed?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I'm not understanding some of the comments. Did people not recognize the avant garde bohemian world that Claire was introducing young Sarah to. Couple that with the alcohol assisted demolition of inhibitions and the repressed sexual personas of each woman- (Claire dominant, Sarah submissive, both lesbian)- that were suddenly given free reign, and everything seems to be developing quite organically and believably. The sex scenes were undeniably erotic, and them being far from vanilla cookie cutter is a huge positive imho. I have read many boilerplate lesbian romance stories, and while enjoyable, they can get predictable and repetative at times. When a story pops up that is edgy, with a final form that has yet to be determined, I would hope that other readers would give the writers some latitude before bailing or ragging on it. I am here for whatever the author's imaginations devise. The overall quality and creativity of this story is faaaaar better than most. JMTCW

BillyslateBillyslateover 2 years ago

Different Story?

I am unsure where or where the original intent was in developing this story, however this chapter was a bit difficult for me to read. I started reading it 1-hour after it was posted, then put it away for a while after the seemingly very dark twist crept into Sarah's / Claire's relationship.

The writing remains excellent, however the storyline took too much of a dark turn for my taste. This chapter went beyond a gentle or playful spanking to almost intensely mean, spiteful or hurtful actions and language by Claire.

CH. 05's characters appeared to be dramatically different Sarah's / Claire's!!

CH. 05 was definitely not the real cute / fun read as CH. 01-04

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A well-crafted tale. For those who think the story all of a sudden became d/s, I would suggest that you read with the wide-eyed naïveté of a jeune Sarah.

Donos253Donos253over 2 years ago

Enjoying the story with a rising level of love and life and will be waiting with expectations for the next episode to be good as well….thanks

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