All Comments on 'Impenetrable Fortress Ch. 01'

by berrycreamsensation

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GortmundyGortmundy7 months ago

Good story and a nice starting point. Im keen to read more.

wsftotbwsftotb7 months ago

Good story. I'm waiting for the next chapter. Thanks for sharing your talent with us!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

That’s it?! I have to know what happens next!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Well written, but you need to work on your story telling ability.

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