All Comments on 'Imperfect Beauty'

You mean I'm the first to comment.....Not fair! (What's the problem folks-are you all a bunch of ADD addled people that can't enjoy having a long tale unfolded naturally and erotically? Shesh!!!) I'm barely halfway into, and into it I am....it is such a full, lush work....I love the blending of your protagonist's "inner dialogue", with extreemly realistic dialogue (the mother/daughter dialogue is insanely hilarious) all mixed together with incredibly erotic and beautifully written sex.... Wow!!!

Oh and the authoress happens to be beautiful herself!

The whole story was perfect from beginning to end (didn't think as much of the gang bang.....). I liked the way it played out, but am sad there isn't more - maybe to come? Keep it up.