All Comments on 'Impregnation Cruise Ch. 03: Two Days at Sea'

I've been following the other chapters in your unique story, and I feel compelled to say... You're a marvelous writer. The timing, the diction, the eloquence... But more than anything, I beg you to please keep writing, because we need more stories (of this genre, but most erotica as well) from a fellow female perspective. All your characters are well developed too. That your story is well done - is a special bonus and thrill. And I believe you must be an excellent lover offline too!! Thank you.

I liked this and the other stories in this series, some very hot imagery and timing. That said... I do find it a little ridiculous that she can only get pregnant (or maybe she just thinks she can) in that one day with Charles. I have a feeling shell get back home and it'll be Doug's or someone elses!