All Comments on 'Impropriety Ch. 01'

A fascinating start. Very much looking forward to seeing where this goes.

You know, I'm kinda hoping Alex continues to push Rose to such a breaking point that she flips and dominates Alex instead, maybe even usurping Eleanor at the end...

Completely unexpected and loved every minute of it. Your words paint an incredibly real and accurate picture which makes this so much better. I can’t wait to see where it goes next.

THE WAY I FELT SO BAD when Miss Eleanor told Rose that another sub was coming into the household. God. WHY DOES IT GET ME SO BAD.

This is one of those stories posted on here that genuinely scares me at just how much I want it. I have fantasized about being Rose so much I am genuinely scared by this representation of it. Amazing work.

I can't wait to see what Miss Eleanor does when she gets back and finds out what happened here.

Absolutely love this, great writing and I can't wait to see how this story continues.