All Comments on 'Impulsive'

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Anonymousover 5 years ago

Nice

Well written, flowed nicely, a good read. Thank you

cudsnuggleat over 5 years ago

WOW SEVEN STARS; AMAZING

Superbly amazing!!

Anonymousover 5 years ago

Sooooooooooo Good!

I cannot wait to read the next chapter! O please can they eventually get married and have babies!

Crazy2Wheeler over 5 years ago

Excellent, a nice start to a few chapters or a flash read.

Very well written, the opportunities possible to expand on this initial offering would be great for us readers. An initial character introduction and the meeting(s) with each having such workings in their minds, nicely done.

BRAVO!!!

Anonymousover 5 years ago

I really like this story. It was written well! I would love to hear more about Zane and Karina in the future

Anonymousover 5 years ago

Great story!

Great characters. Hopefully more to come?

Anonymousover 5 years ago

More!!!!

I can’t wait to read more!!! Love Zane!! Update soon!!

Dunkirk over 5 years ago

More please

Cane and the dr need to go to bed together

Anonymousover 5 years ago

Zane xxx

Loved it kept me on the edge can’t wait for next part xx

Anonymousover 3 years ago

Bet your good with kids, huh?

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