All Comments on 'Impurity Ch. 02'

I like the slow build it is more natural then alot of the wam bam thank you ma'am stories that are generally in literotica.

Cant wait for more!!

A nice buildup in a story is like foreplay before sex. Much more enjoyable at the climax. Author you wrote this story realistically like a teenagers life could be. Nice entertainment so far. Thanks for a good read.ML

Enjoying the way this is developing. I have my own thoughts on the directions it might take and I am looking forward to reading the next chapters. There are all sorts of possibilities here. With five ladies and two blokes in the frame anything is possible, at least I hope so (grin)

over all good but it seems strange that he told dawn about finding the hole instead of fixing it himself all it would take is some tape good chance that since he didn't fix it that his sister was watching him and amy

NUMBER 11

i thiknk you have to be the dirtiest person iv ever read fiction on. Would you like to participate in a Skat party with me Polo_mark?

tbh, i love you

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