by AspernEssling
Disney World needs to hire you, because you've taken us on one hell of a roller coaster here. Great writing , of course, but you're about to send a perfectly healthy 30-ish year-old man to the cardiologist with all these twists. Can't wait for the next one.
I look for the next chapter all the time as I really enjoy this read!
How many more women are you going to entice Chris with only to have them whisked away to another guy or a job or whatever. That's ok, Chris doesn't take mind being hurt again. What's one more time? He'll just stand in the corner & drink a ginger beer. Are a kiddin' me?! Fuck!! Screw the high marks. I'm tired of reading this palaver. No marks.
about the women in Quebec....as long as there is only one of them and perhaps one male Quebecois...more, and it becomes a cluster of very arrogant assholes - voice of experience thru the years...
Seems like the story is just a parade of women that Chris sleeps with, considers sleeping with, or decides he doesn't want to sleep with. There seems to be very little description of other intangibles as to why he likes these women, other than the sex. He also has no clue about commitment.
Harry Seinfeld said to always leave them wanting and you're a bloody good wizard at that. Thank you for the music, in this case the story that leaves you on a high...!