All Comments on 'In a Hole'

Smooth, credible and without too many extras.

A little different from the usual predictable stuff here, thank you.

I seriously thought this was going to suck•. It didn't• Some errors in writing, but overall, a good piece. Thanks.

Thank you for the nice comments! I need to find a good editor to work with. That will really help. I'm trying to write things that have characters you could like and hope to find for real and I'm working on stories that are a bit different from the run of the mill. There's so much variability here on Literotica, but I've found some stories that really wet my panties.