All Comments on 'In and Out: A Tryst'

Your story is short on logic (how can two people maintain the separation?) on how this came to be and why they agree to do it, plus what effect on their outside lives.

I dunno.

MichaelG

Weird, but interesting. They're living in that moment, a moment without context, unrelated to their lives outside the moment. Wondering how and why is outside of the moment and irrelevant. The moment has its own logic...and rules. 5*