All Comments on 'In Daddy's Care Pt. 01'

Total lack of credibility, waste of time reading it.

Great start, looking forward to more.

I think the best method to relieve the strain of full breasts is using the mouth and suck method directly to the nipples.

Oops. A typo - wipe front to back, not back to front. Should have caught that in our edit.

This is getting interesting. I sure hope you have another chapter to post soon!

just a few things, there was no mention made of pain killers, the injuries she sustained were bad enough to warrant cutting her top off to save pain but no mention, also it would be more believable for to fall asleep because of the long day and effect of pain medication, also the words of the song are, I want to kiss you all over, over and over again, otherwise good strong story line with potential!!