All Comments on 'In Debt'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Not bad...

though i´ve got to say, i like the idea of the gay enforcers the best - why should wives/daughters always suffer for their males stupidity?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
gay enforcers, yes!!

Great idea about the muscle being gay so the male debtor pays with his own ass for once. I hope you write that.

I've enjoyed your previous stories but I'm also liking the slightly grittier theme to the recent ones.

near1111near1111over 8 years ago
nice

funny Story. and specialy the ending gave me a good laugh when the enforcer offerd the poor dude an Alibi to get rid of his Dragon Lady.:) 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
bullshit

The entire situation is stupid.

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