All Comments on 'In Defence of Bluebeard'

I'd love to offer some constructive criticism on this one, but I'm not sure it could be improved beyond some minor proofing - there's a couple places near the beginning where you wrote that 'Sam' said/thought something when it was actually Sarah. // I tend to favor longer and more explicit stories, but this is an amazing short. There's something hotter, to me, about willing submission like this than when it's forced. (Obviously "willing" is nuanced in this one.)

Fantastic. This reads like a one-off so I'm not expecting more, but it would be cool to read more.