All Comments on 'In Dreams She Came Pt. 01'

This was something a little different for me. I had originally wanted this in time for Halloween but ran into distractions. I have not completed the story, only an outline. I normally don't outline my stories, but this one got me excited. Hope you like it. - KB

I can’t wait for more.

I'm looking forward to the next one

Ya I'm hooked on this one already.

always enjoiy your work from brews and brushes to test of your great work! more please!!!

I love husband and wife/paranormal stories, and I think you have written a great first chapter! I especially enjoyed your description of the psychic/paranormal sex suffered by the wife ... the reference to the anal sex was especially nasty. I look forward to Pt. 02 and hope that the wife performs has to pull a demon/incubus/succubus train while the husband pulls back the sheets and watches. What would the wife tell the husband at the next day's breakfast? mmmmm 5 stars from me!

Thank you!

I wanted to take a quick second to thank you all for reading and rating my stories. I wasn't really paying attention, so today I looked at my list of stories. To date, I have published 89 stories on Literotica.com, with an average rating of 4.05 stars and with more than 2.9 Million views. I appreciate all of the great feedback.

KB

Just... wow!

5-stars

Part 2 should have things break out better. Great start

Hi,

I wish that you can kinda show the procees of the succubus devouring his soul.

Very nicely done. A lot of erotic horror stories have a distinctly cheesy tone, but this is satisfyingly serious. There is, perhaps, room for a bit more character detail, but this is well-written and engaging stuff.

Part 2 posted to site today. Look for it in a few days.

Thank you for sharing. Can't wait to read the next set.