All Comments on 'In Dungeons Deep Ch. 02'

Keep it going!

Nice setting. Totaly looking forward for the next parts!

Very enjoyable story, please keep going.

Nice worldbuilding. Looking forward to more. 5 stars!

keep going this story is too good

I really enjoyed this tale. You have talent. Please continue writing

A very good read. My only gripe is the need for someone with a practised eye to read over the story before publishing it as there are a number of instances where errors were made and words missed out, other than that it was good. Looking forward to the next instalment.

I do like the tale so far. Reading both parts in one go it was a bit strange to end with an intimate scene and start anew with another intimate scene. The first part , in my opinion,was better because it build up and had much more exploring in it. More of an RP feeling to it. Mind, this is no complaint, it is still a good story and nicely written and enjoyable. I am just wondering if you ever read the story about the one person who inherited a house and slowly finds all the mythic female creatures in the house and builds a leationship with them...Lug certainly reminds me of the tinker gnome(or Goblin or whatever) who was responsible for maintaining the house. But that is probably just coincidence. I am sure looking forward to the next part!