by fsqueeze
This already great story keeps getting better. I think I know where it is heading. I say think because occasionally a good author will fool me. But if it leads where I expect, that in no way detracts from the masterful way you told the story. In fact, as much as I usually like an author to surprise me, this is one I really hope I guessed right.
I like the build-up...you're keeping a good pace with the anticipation. I'm not a huge fan of the single page chapters, you may have already lost some readers for that, but it's a preference thing. Keep writing!
I am loving this. I hope the ending is a happy one for everybody! 5*
Yes, so well written and arousing. He has wanted Ann and at least he got the process started !! Ann not only giving him a BJ but sucking every drop of cum out of his cock w/o losing any says volumes. Plus got herself off. I am sure Ann will find a way after she processes things later, to screw him well. Yes, please we need a few more hot chapters. You do so well, thank you.
Your writing just gets better and better. Introducing the Kenny sequence was a stroke (so to speak) of genius.