All Comments on 'In Her Cousin's Footsteps Pt. 02'

You build excitement very well. Please keep going.

The introduction and follow up Pt. 02 were quite nice, however felt the "self pleasuring component" was a bit 2-long. Masturbation is a 1-person activity, even when the individual is thinking of a same sex person. Remember, this is in the Lesbian Category, therefore please do not turn the story into a "masturbation fest", Most of the best stories on this site are what we designate as "Slow Burn", sometimes delaying the sex scenes until the 4th or 5th chapters. Keep the story interesting with background, seduction, intrigue and maybe a bit of emotional conflict. There is no requirement to rush into the sex in multichapter stories.

A good read for your review, would be "An Elegant Seduction" by Shaima32, where the sexual scenes commence developing in Ch. 04. It is a lovely story, which I feel "In Her Cousin's Footsteps" could definitely also become.

Definitely continue with this story, since I feel many readers are currently enjoying the 1st 02-Pts and are waiting for Pt. 03.

Love the pacing

I'm looking forward to seeing more.

About the masturbation part being too long. I thought it was appropriate and fits in well with the story. To Billy - buddy this is her story to write. Looking forward to another chapter soon!

Wish this were a whole book

Keep the chapters coming.

Bring on more of this story. Very interested and would really hate to be left hanging.