All Comments on 'In His Mother's Bed'

by geronimo_appleby

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Ian ShergoldIan Shergoldover 7 years ago
I loved it.

Straight to the point with no unnecessary back story.

And greatly written.

navelmannavelmanover 7 years ago
once again a winner

woooow the sheer thrill that this story offers

its hugely exciting

the mild non consent element spiced up the whole thing

wish the fucking could have been delayed more

superbly crafted

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great

Wish it was 5 times longer. Good job

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Five stars

What a great story of mother/son love. This story rates as a masterpiece of lust and love. I love how the mother loves on her dear son, allowing him to "warm her bed" all the while giving her son a warm wer place to relieve his lust. Mother and son have set forth on a new journey of pleasure as each night the mothers bed will creak, the room will fill with moans and grunts as both mother and son achieve the best orgasm in the world the incest orgasm. Each night mother will accept her son's gift of sperm right into her womb until the inevitable happens. Mom delivers her son's love child and becomes a grandmother on the same day. As for the son he will beam with pride when he comes to bed, his naked mother waiting for him, the pregnant glow of her swelling breasts and belly driving the son to new heights of pride and lust as he mounts his mother again and again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
MORE PLEASE~

Now that you've got us please continue this story! Perhaps pregancy and some diaper changing in their future?! This story has lots of potential! Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Too usual

This kind of story is so usual . The woman who doesn't want to have sex to finaly find out, she wanted it but she didn't know she did.

kennyboy82kennyboy82over 7 years ago

Absolute fuckin' Prize Winner in my book! Left me soooo hard! fantastic, one of your best! Easy 5 Star award winner.

ManoBlueManoBlueover 7 years ago
Pest

The son was a annoying pest!

TSreaderTSreaderover 7 years ago
Kind of fast...

But you did point that out to us in the beginning! Very good! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Left my pussy so fucking wet! I was playing with my clit while reading this!!!AMAZING!!

donaldelliott11donaldelliott11over 7 years ago
Loved It Until the ending

I'm a big fan, but the end of this one disappointed me. She was SO consistently reluctant that her final statements were not credible to me.

4 Stars from me..

Don

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Lovely story

Very horny. Loved the little story - nice description of his jizz shooting inside his mothers wet and aroused pussy. I will look for more of your stories.

hornacekhornacekover 7 years ago
Failure in characterization

For a story where we're supposed to root for the son, maybe he shouldn't have been written as a whiny child who complained about everything?

mcmurryaemcmurryaeover 7 years ago
Wow.

That's a page turner! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Sweet Stuff!

A beautiful, delicious story! Wish there were more... 💓

boatbummboatbummabout 7 years ago
Be careful what you wish for....

Mummy's going to fuck him to death now -- or at least try to!

Lovely tale, well written as usual. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
A VERY WELL CRAFTED STORY. THE 2 CHARACTERS ARE MASTERFULLY CONCEIVED & DEPICTED

I was imagining i was in my mom's bed in a poorly winterized cottage somewhere in Canada in January.

LOVED the story & gave it a 5!

jeronimo_appleby is a good writer.

You can't go wrong if you read this story provided that you're into incest taboo fiction.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
any boy's dream

I liked the humor of them both believing there were setting limits to what Garth was allowed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Well-written little story

I’ve read a few of your stories now. You have a high level of writing skills and know how to build up the tempo and characters in a believable manner with some clever dialogue and twists. Very minor typos do not detract from the pace.

Enjoyable reads. Thanks for the effort.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

So realistic story....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

When mother gives into her son that means wants him rest of her life.remember time I fucked my mom got her pregnant told her want kids with her we end up having three then her sister came over my aunt told my mom want your fuck me and put his kid in me heard that told my take clothes off she rip them off me them rape for real which I did rammed her hard she screamedfuck me rape meeven rammed her asshole she yelled out my ass time I finished she was sore couple days later told mom your son knocked me up mom told and said to her tell your sister moving in she did the three of us share same bed every night have threesomewhere my mom gave me fine kids and my aunt gave me four to this day we still live together both woman in mid 60's still fuck both of them

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Mom needs to begin the swelling of her baby bump as the months go by.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Wonderful short story with good characterisation for its brevity. Nice and romantic with just the right amount of kink. Would love another chapter detailing their sexual exploration. It's a shame you appear to have stopped writing as your work is consistently excellent

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