All Comments on 'In His Truck'

A well written story, grammar, spelling etc all good, characters' names consistent, but just not a cock-hardener. Thanks for submitting it, though.

Use punctuation as you would speak. Otherwise, I quite agree; there's nothing like giving a blow job in a vehicle!

This author is a good writer but I have commented before on another of his stories that he needs to give more attention to the requirements of good, skillful writing. For example, I noticed wrong verb tenses and missing words. He seems to be in too much of a hurry to craft his sentences according to the best writing standards. Nevertheless, the content provides the kind of story I like best -- good, vivid description of cocksucking, which is for me the best, if not the only, kind of man-to-man sex.

WE need more.

A man after my own heart, this story left me rock hard. A little more description/detail would have given the story an extra edge of excitement but it's easy-reading feel didn't disappoint.

Punctuation too. Damn what a hot story! I loved reading this cause it hit close to home. I too am a cl sucker. I've blown five guys in their cars or trucks in the last two years. All were married. I've had repeat performances with a couple. Almost got caught a couple times. I love the excitement.

Writing is ok story, exciting, never did it in a truck but a few in a car all ways with an eye on area when this was all so illegal. thanks, aaron